A Picture...
This photo was taken by me in 2016. It´s my old house in Viña del Mar. The importance of this photo is not the place, or the house, or the hour, or the year, or anything of that. The importance in this photo it´s the sky. Since a lot of time I like the sky, but not any sky, I like just in the sunset when the sky have many clouds colorful. The pink color it´s my favorite, but I also like with other colors too.
The photo was taken whit my cellphone, an iPhone 5.
I was waiting for the bus, I looked at the sky like I used to do, and seems to me like a spongy mattress. At first I wanted to take a photograph only to the sky, but the cellphone didn´t capture the colors in the right way. The best way I found to show the colors it was to include the houses too. However it wasn´t exactly the same colors than in reality. Now, when I look the photo I think that it´s more interesting in the way it is. A photo only with a sky it´s not than cool.
This picture it's so beautiful. I love the sunset for the same reason, the colours are amazing in that moment.
ResponderEliminarI like the houses in the photo with their fake symmetry and the cables haha.
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ResponderEliminarThe sky is so mystical. I like people to portray it because it is hand-painted. It never ceases to amaze me.
ResponderEliminarIs a really really nice photo: makes me think about this publicity who says "this photo was taken in an Iphone 6" jjjj and yeah, the houses bring the horizon and sense to the photo
ResponderEliminarThe text is clear, lexical items are on the overall adequately used.
ResponderEliminarSome inconsistencies in the conjugations and word choice affect coherence at times.
Correctiosn:
I like just in the sunset= during sunset
The pink color it´s my favorite= Pink is my favourite
and seems to me= it seemed to me
The best way I found to show the colors it was to include = leave that "it" out
it´s not than cool.= it's not THAT cool
T: 3 L: 2, G: 2.= 7 pts.
GRADE: 5.5